Wednesday, May 21, 2014

Thank You Letter for Submission and Request for Revision

This is a good example of  thank you letter for submission and request for revision. You have to modify the letter according to your purpose.

Dear Mr. Mark,

The speech that you submitted to me for presentation at [name] retirement party is very great with one minor exception. Inasmuch as Adam is somewhat sensitive about his age, I feel that it would be inappropriate to make any reference to this fact.

I would appreciate it if you would delete those sections in Paragraphs 4 and 5 which specifically comment about his age and/or employ the words "golden years", and find a suitable substitution. Once again, the speech is very well written.

Your Sincerely,
Jack Anderson

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